lmao nice. Love the exaggeration and play on the frame of this From the eyes literally cornering his head to the never ending smile, this reminds me of something I'd read from a children's book back in the 80s. Love it.
Great first post! I agree with Greg with the fact that you really get the feelign of this monster invading your space.
Lol, I agree with Greg in that it has a nice children's book illustration feel. No real suggestions, but it'd make a good childs short story.