I'd love to see a little more detail in the faces, just to see their expressions so I know what they are thinking - the title suggests they are angry and I can't really tell that from the poses alone... except the rude finger... but looking good so far ^_^
I am not a fan of the middle finger but poses look as if they were lounging and I emailed you what I think... it just needs to be refined....Try to update it this week and edit the same post to show your progress.
I personally think that the finger totally exposes the pirates for what they are... and tells a lot about the story, I am excited to see what new things you come up with...
thank you for the comments. @lesley - the title implies that ninjas and pirates need not fight, they can chill together. the ninja (being the sly, subtle one) enjoys a drink, while the pirate is showed being vulgar and rude (and piraty, like "arrrgh, piss off matey") to the onlooker. i am not great at animation stuff, but will try to refine the faces and clothes.
I'd love to see a little more detail in the faces, just to see their expressions so I know what they are thinking - the title suggests they are angry and I can't really tell that from the poses alone... except the rude finger... but looking good so far ^_^
ReplyDeleteI am not a fan of the middle finger but poses look as if they were lounging and I emailed you what I think... it just needs to be refined....Try to update it this week and edit the same post to show your progress.
ReplyDeleteI personally think that the finger totally exposes the pirates for what they are... and tells a lot about the story, I am excited to see what new things you come up with...
ReplyDeletethank you for the comments. @lesley - the title implies that ninjas and pirates need not fight, they can chill together. the ninja (being the sly, subtle one) enjoys a drink, while the pirate is showed being vulgar and rude (and piraty, like "arrrgh, piss off matey") to the onlooker. i am not great at animation stuff, but will try to refine the faces and clothes.
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