First blood... looks great this picture has a sinister feel to it gives me the creeps. I am having a hard time grasping the space in which the scene is taking place. Maybe a litle more fall of and atmosphere towards the left where the window would help to push your eye forword the crisp edges on the window and the curtains are a distraction. overall disturbing= good job
Great work Adam! The only thing that is somewhat unclear is the lightest vs. darkest contrast making a focal point at the window. Maybe this light vs. dark contrast could be moved more towards the center to highlight the relationship between the 2 characters. Regardless, I really like the composition and design of the figures. Nice work.
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ReplyDeleteFirst blood... looks great this picture has a sinister feel to it gives me the creeps. I am having a hard time grasping the space in which the scene is taking place. Maybe a litle more fall of and atmosphere towards the left where the window would help to push your eye forword the crisp edges on the window and the curtains are a distraction. overall disturbing= good job
ReplyDeleteGreat work Adam! The only thing that is somewhat unclear is the lightest vs. darkest contrast making a focal point at the window. Maybe this light vs. dark contrast could be moved more towards the center to highlight the relationship between the 2 characters. Regardless, I really like the composition and design of the figures. Nice work.
ReplyDeletethanks, looks like I might have to make some revisions before weeks end. The direction is most appreciated.
ReplyDeleteI already told you what I thought, in terms of the placement of the right hand and the value grouping. Good illustration though. Keep it up man.
ReplyDeleteI would have rather seen you revamp this one and not post the ......
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